>My love for commas knows no bounds . . .

>I just finished a peer review on a classmate’s paper in Comp III and had this to say about the use of commas:

The one thing I would really pick out is your sentence structure. You are a great writer, but you need to stock up on commas and use them more generously. Heck, buy them in bulk. Whenever you proofread your own work, either say it out loud or try to hear it in your mind as it would be spoken. Whenever the voice pauses, not going immediately on to the next word but stopping just for a heartbeat, ask yourself: could I put a comma here? More often than not, the answer is yes. I like to think that the comma is how we encapsulate ideas for the reader on the phrase level; it gives their brain a half-second to process what they have just read. Without the comma, it requires more effort to understand what we are reading. They can even help us writers judge the best length for each sentence.

I’m going to save that bit for future peer reviews; personally, I think the comma is a commonly underused form of punctuation in personal writing.

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2 thoughts on “>My love for commas knows no bounds . . .”

  1. >It's funny you say this. I think I use way too many commas but then I read them and I feel like they're totally validated.My sister (bless her heart) is terrible at grammar and had me read some essays this semester before she turned them in. She asked me, "Does a comma go there?" And I said, "Read it aloud? Does it sound like there's a pause there?" And she said no. And that's really it; a paper should sound conversational in some way. Otherwise it's just confusing. Embrace the commas!

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