Haiku: Lapses


Black Hole in the universe
(Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Black holes burn, weighty
in a mind enslaved to sleep;
memories vanish.

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  1. This is delightful. I can see in the pattern you give here, the loss of something important from your mind, like the blackhole which distorts things that appear behind it and sucks up anything too close in front of it. There’s also the image of a mind enslaved to sleep, which, to me, means eventually you’re going to sleep and whatever it is you’re trying to remember will be gone as you forget that you were even trying to remember it.

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